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Planeta 86 Dan Abnett

Planeta 86

Dan Abnett

Published 2012
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Paperback
348 pages
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Embedded is set in a future where humans have begun to colonize other planets. Eighty-Six is the most recent settlement and its where universe-weary, award-winning journalist Lex Falk has arrived to investigate rumors of political unrest and a military lockdown on all information leaving the planet. Falks clout gets him embedded with the military, but its not until hes approached by a clandestine party that can actually embed him into the body of Nestor Bloom, a combat soldier, that he gets the real story about whats happening on Eighty-Six.Elmore Leonard famously advised Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip. If Dan Abnett had taken this approach, the novel could have been about 150 pages shorter and far more enjoyable. He has apparently never met a simile that hes not keen on rubbing up against.The book is far too descriptive and I know many people might argue that such is necessary for believable world-building, a sentiment with which I might normally agree. If youre going to present me with an alien world, I want to see it. The problem here is that Eighty-Six isnt much different from Earth. There are no alien life forms, no exotic landscapes, no cultural clashes. And yet Abnett is always keen to tell us what shade of blue the sky is and what the green trees in the forest look like. Other than the existence of blurds (some form of insect/bird hybrid), theres really nothing unusual about the setting. And theres nothing particularly futuristic other than the ubiquitous presence of a poison called Insect-Aside and apparently inorganic foodstuffs that always end with the suffix -effect (such as chicken parmigiana-effect, which can be washed down with a can of tasty NoCal cola-effect). Even the tech through which Falk is embedded into Bloom is clichéd--Falk is suspended in a Jung tank, which is just a clever name for the science fiction trope of a womb-like tank in which Falk is suspended in a viscous, amniotic-like liquid. None of this is particularly bad, but none of it is particularly good--and its been done much better before.The book takes forever to get going, developing characters and relationships that are promptly jettisoned as soon as Falk is embedded within Bloom. The actual embedding--the part of the story with the most promise--missed out on so many opportunities to explore the psychological issues of dwelling within anothers mind. If Bloom and Falk had been inhabiting the same consciousness throughout most of the narrative, there could have been some really standout scenes. However, Falk is simply a repressed observer, a passenger, within Bloom until Bloom is shot in the head. At this point, Bloom becomes an unconscious passenger in his own body and Falk has to take over, a plot that still has some possibility as Falk is not a trained soldier. However, every time Falk gets into a jam, Blooms muscle memory arrives to save the day, allowing Falk to blast his way out of every inconvenience with which he comes into contact. When Bloom is shot and his persona disappears, the book basically becomes a stripped down version of Avatar, only without the aliens.Other issues include:1. From what I can tell, the U.S. is now the United Status (no explanation is given for this) and the army with which Falk is embedded seems to be U.S. As a result, all of the British spellings for words seem incongruous and often jarring. A minor pet peeve, I understand, but there it is.2. So were apparently centuries into the future, colonizing planets, and the two dominant powers are the U.S. and the Bloc, who speak Russian and whose military vehicles are all adorned with red stars. Thats right--were fighting a Cold War with the Communist Bloc in outerspace. I might forgive this in a piece of 1950s science fiction, but in 2013? We cant come up with a fresh new narrative for who the bad guys are?3. It is never made clear as to how Blooms body is still functioning after hes been shot in the head, right below the eye. The mental image I kept getting as Falk tried to will Blooms body to do his bidding was Weekend at Bernies in military garb.4. The ending. What. The. Freek®. So, in the last 10 pages, Falk actually, against all plot odds, discovers something half ass interesting. But thats the thing--only half ass. We dont get the whole ass. What he finds is only hinted at and the repercussions are ambiguous. Basically, it took 400 pages to get to the real story and then it just stops. I wanted to hit something and hit something hard when I reached the end.5. The whole use of Freek® as a linguistic patch that prohibits a person from using any expletive other than Freek.In the end, I can only offer this advice: read John Scalzi.Cross posted at This Insignificant Cinder and at Shelf Inflicted